My first attempt ever at writing a song

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My first attempt ever at writing a song

#1 Postby MississippiHurricane » Fri Aug 24, 2007 9:23 pm

Like it, love it, leave it, hate it :) I guess i had too much free time on my hands or something... If you have heard of Blink 182's "Adams's song" then the guitar in the begging through the whole song it what it would sound like. Its kinda of a depressing song i guess and it has not been edited for punctuation or gammer as of yet as it WAS just something to do to kill time...here ya go!

"The dark of night"

As i sit in this still room watching the sun fade away a sense of darkness falls upon me.
I feel the light of my days coming to an end and begin to feel my soul start to empty of
its purpose. I begin to wonder if the fate we suffer in life is that of society or is it that of our own hands. As the sun sinks lower into the sky i start to cry thinking about the stuff that the day brought into my life and how its being taken away from me.


My sense of hope is gone forever, never to return again. As winter comes, so does the dark of night. If people would just understand me, I could once again be free from this prision of my own demise.


As i slip into a physical coma, I start to bleed anger that pours from my emotional being.....and then the phone rings: its Clair on the other end telling me its over between us and the dark of night sets in again. Oh then the thoughts of death run through my head trying to find which one will be the slowest as i deserve the slowest.


My sense of hope is gone forever, never to return again. As winter comes, so does the dark of night. If people would just understand me, I could once again be free from this prision of my own demise.



Then i go back into the room by body bleeding everywhere i begin to sob and all kinds of thoughts fill my head: "why did this happen to me" why doesnt anyone understand me and why must i be last to be first? I begin to feel cold sweep over my body as my arms turn blue and my life fading away like the dark of night. I look to the sun one more time and i fade away in to the dark of night.


My sense of hope is gone forever, never to return again. As winter comes, so does the dark of night. If people would just understand me, I could once again be free from this prision of my own demise.
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#2 Postby Cyclone1 » Fri Aug 24, 2007 9:26 pm

I should probably post my song "Santa Gets his Labor Overseas". Nice one, Chris. Emo... but still very good. lol
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