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A Little Child

#1 Postby Pebbles » Fri Sep 23, 2005 10:17 pm

I wrote this tonight.. and just wanted us to stop and ponder a moment.
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Little Child
Christine Lyons
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Little child,
so innocent and sweet.
You walk down the street
with dirt on bare feet.

Little child ,
as you move here and there,
you take each step
with gingerly care.

Little child,
with grit in your hair.
You look for home,
how did it fare?

Little child,
with tears on your face.
You find your home
in a different place.

Little child,
as you run in the clutter.
You grab something up
and your body does shudder.

Little child,
what do you hold there?
A salt crusted bear
in it's belly a tear.

Little child,
standing there all alone.
Cluching your bear,
in what once was your home.
Last edited by Pebbles on Sun Sep 25, 2005 12:55 am, edited 5 times in total.
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#2 Postby brunota2003 » Fri Sep 23, 2005 10:48 pm

all some poem!!! very touching...
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#3 Postby HurricaneQueen » Fri Sep 23, 2005 11:00 pm

Wow. Very moving, Pebbles.
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#4 Postby GulfHills » Sat Sep 24, 2005 12:01 am

Very nice!
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#5 Postby Pebbles » Sat Sep 24, 2005 9:09 am

Thankyou
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#6 Postby beachbum_al » Sat Sep 24, 2005 10:11 am

You just brought me to tears. :cry:
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#7 Postby Pebbles » Sat Sep 24, 2005 2:34 pm

beachbum_al wrote:You just brought me to tears. :cry:


*hugs* It's a sad poem for a sad situation... thankyou for sharing your feelings as it lets me know it's worth. Even uncomfortable writings have their place.
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#8 Postby LAwxrgal » Sat Sep 24, 2005 2:53 pm

Very moving poem, Pebbles!

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#9 Postby jburns » Sat Sep 24, 2005 3:27 pm

Very nice. Before you share it elsewhere I beleive in the fifth line the word would be shudder and not shutter.
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#10 Postby vespersparrow » Sat Sep 24, 2005 5:18 pm

AWWwwwwwwww :(
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#11 Postby Weatherfreak14 » Sat Sep 24, 2005 5:19 pm

Thats good writeing.
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#12 Postby Pebbles » Sat Sep 24, 2005 6:47 pm

jburns wrote:Very nice. Before you share it elsewhere I beleive in the fifth line the word would be shudder and not shutter.


I know who I need for all my editing needs now LOL I'm always mispelling! :P Thanks
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#13 Postby gpickett00 » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:11 pm

Weatherfreak14 wrote:Thats good writeing.


that is not
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#14 Postby LAwxrgal » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:32 pm

Also, "fair" in the third stanza should be changed to "fare." :)
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